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I could picture every line in my head. Very descriptive and detailed! Great job! 
Quite graphic. Not what I was expecting when I read the title, but a pleasant surprise. I feel like you could turn this into a book. With a little more detail and added story line, this could be a best selling horror story.

Nice piece! I really enjoyed reading this! Glad I could get to know you a little better!
Looking forward to reading the rest and finding out who the mystery man is!!

I actually laughed out loud when I read the part about Viktor.
Bonfires are the best! I love love love hanging out with my friends in the crisp fall air, talking about anything and everything. Those are some of the best moments:)
Compelling. This created a very realistic picture in my mind. An emotional roller coaster. Great feel good story!

Family game nights are the best! Great memories you can always hold on to!
This is deep. You know how when you read a story, sometimes you just read it and don't really connect with it? Well this wasn't one of those. Great job capturing images in my mind!